"Is it
true?"
"Yes your
grace" the servant paused before continuing, "the child has been
taken."
"And my
daughter?"
"Her screams at
the discovery woke the fellow-tree. The
first ones to see her had to restrain her. Her mind seemed temporarily broken
as one might expect under the circumstances."
"Do not lie to
me Pagilli, was there any of the child's blood? Are we sure it was just
taken?"
"There was no
blood your grace; as far as we know, your granddaughter is still alive."
"Thank you
Pagilli, when my daughter wakes, please bring her to me. You may leave me for
the moment to collect myself. The council will want to know what has happened.
They will want to know something passed through the barriers."
"Of course
Queen Ellamana, I will have her brought in when she wakes from her magic
slumber." And with that, Pagilli turned and pulled the curtain aside and
left.
Queen Ellamana could
hold back her tears no longer, as soon as she was alone she started to curse to
herself. Her poor daughter, Allina, must have been distraught at the sight of
the empty crib.
Ellamana knew what
had happened. Or at least she thought she did. He
had come. He had taken Qalida. He had stolen away her granddaughter as
leverage. She had her nightmare play out right in front of her; He had discovered her plan to break their
deal.
The queen felt sick
to her stomach; her mind racing. After dismissing the thought that any harm
might actually have been done to the child, she knew the worst part was the
upcoming façade she would have to put on. No one could know of course of the
deal she had made with Xefgoraathi all those years ago. No one could understand
the burden she had carried for the past century.
Her anger shifted
quickly to the witch. She lied to me!
Queen Ellamana spat a curse at her own stupidity and self chosen ignorance at
actually believing the ritual could have worked. When the demon had failed to
appear at the summoning ritual, she had hoped the failure would not have been
discovered by Xefgoraathi. She knew now, that there was no doubt the failed
ritual and her missing granddaughter were connected.
Xefgoraathi would
not easily allow her free from their deal. And the only hope of seeing her
granddaughter again, was to accept her
fate… or at least be very convincing that she was going to.
I like how you try to establish your own language and names but if they are not easier to read they are hard to follow as a character.
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